The Harpoon of Love
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Love is Sharp
Dangerous bewildering Dagger
Super sharp and cunning
a momentary chance
Taking an oath of desperation
Eyes glued at first glance
The heavy heart hit hard
on initial impact
Digging into the cavern of loneliness
Freed from the selfishness of lust
What just happened here
Is it me or am I dreaming
open now to anything that happens
No longer hopeless to find another
My deepest Passions can now be feed
Desires can now be fulfilled
Love at its sharpest coverage & reach
I finally found a companion that got me hooked
Wow look at this cute but bizaar relationship, Priceless indeed!
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Thanks for sharing your time with me here @ Kat11, glad you liked it.
your words are bewildering in their flow, their sense and order. I enjoyed every little piece of this work of art.
Thank you @ NiaLee for seeing beyond the obviousness of things here, unique poetry writing is tough to make happen, & not everyone will truly appreciate it all as you have.
When all things come together as meant by the painting, art is found in your voice I can't hear. I do agree that the flw is beautiful and the imperfection is perfection. Love is sharp and can hurt I feel. It is in this that I find what I am willing to do for love. Up and beautiful,
Thanks @ Jspot for your time & for sharing your thoughts on my artful poem here, your a cool dude, and I can't wait to read up on your other hubs.
You have a way with words as I can see, and I'm astounded by your motivation of generating 32 hubs in just 4 days. That's quite impressive indeed, its nice to see that there's other motivated writers as myself on here.
I saw this with the poem I just wrote...I love the way this poem completely removes from the idea that this is a cat with a (yuck) rat until you see the video. Hate the rat love the writing lol.
Yeah that video is quite cute, but that White mouse does look kind of nasty looking, lol. Thanks @ NightFlower for your kind comment there, funny stuff right.
kat11 Level 2 Commenter 4 months ago
Really enjoy the simple pleasures of your poetry. Thanks voted up